I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 17/08/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words, not including the given opening sentence.
The link below takes you to Part Thirty-Six
Finish the story begins with:
“I see absolutely everything.”
The old man who had guided them through the jungle waved the hieroglyph of a huge eye and excitedly made the motions of flight. Marg was amazed and contacted the Brigadier.
“I have an idea if we send up a silent drone containing a camera with infra-red heat seeking equipment we will find the hidden labs and the helicopter survivors in one sweep.”
One of his senior officers laughed loudly and asked disparaging.
“If a man-powered helicopter can’t locate the labs, how can a drone?”
“The silence is the key!” Exclaimed Marg. “The drone cannot be heard as it approaches.”
Fighting broke out in the distance and Don Fernando was soon in contact reporting some success in the search as one of the dead renegades had made a dying remark about the captives.
He spat out out the words. “Now your friends will die.”
Marg said. “We will……………..
(150 WORDS)
To be continued…….
The link below takes you to Part Thirty-Six
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Amazing how you can keep this going and each story is great! I like the idea of using a drone!
Thanks for your always welcome positive response PJ. ~ 🙂
I am not sure all drones are quiet but like the idea of stealth. The large eye was interesting and mysterious.
Thanks Robin ~ This is a prototype barely audible whirling drone. That mysterious eye was provided as the picture prompt by Barbara Beacham, for this week’s “Finish the Story”
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Thanks for reading and responding, have a great week. 🙂
I don’t know how you keep it going – it’s so impressive how you incorporate the prompts every week. Another great instalment 🙂
Thanks Sonya ~ I’m glad you’re enjoying the drifts of variable prompted stories that emerge and meld into the life of Marg.
The poor helicopter survivors (I hope they are still alive!) are still out there! Let’s hope Marg’s stealth drone idea works out.
Thanks Alister ~ The cards are face down at the moment ~ All should make sense when the Joker Dickus comes back on the scene
What? She will what? I love that you always leave me hanging and then pick right up the next week. Loved this chapter John! Thanks for writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and be well… ^..^
Thanks Babs! I hope you are feeling better ~ 🙂
Getting better every day!
I love this story… amazing how you fit such disparate prompts into your story line. Well done!! Yea.. Mondy’s almost here… and time for another installment!!
Thanks again CQ ~ I am very far behind with my comment responses and I am sorry this is so late.
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