I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 16/02/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words.
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MYSTERIOUS ISLAND (11)
by John Yeo
Little did they know when the photographer took their picture they would find themselves trapped in a painting.
They say life is an ongoing ever-changing picture, when Diamond Jack arrived to say goodbye on his very powerful motorcycle, he presented Marg with a painting as a present. Jack is an artist, he had many sketches and photographs of Marg and the team with the wolves, to turn into paintings. Marg said goodbye before catching her plane to London.
The Brigadier was upset, Dr Dickus was still on the loose, last reported on the way to Dubai, with Angelo on his trail.
The Brigadier was very interested in the painting that Diamond Jack had passed on to Marg, he never revealed how he knew about it, there were two well known international scientists among the musicians. When the painting was examined, there appeared to be writing beneath, that turned out to be a very valuable formula. Marg was rewarded with a huge bonus.
Several months later death struck swiftly……….
(150 words)
To be continued…………..
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Good episode, John. My goodness. You’re going to kill someone off next time. That’s a real cliffhanger. We’ll just have to wait . Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
I’m so glad you are enjoying this Suzanne ~ We are both curious now to see what happens next ~ Thanks for your lovely response ~ 🙂
What next? What next? I love it John! Thank you for participating and I hope to see you back again next week! Be well… ^..^
You certainly will see me back next week Babs ~ Far too many loose ends are waving about ~ Thanks for another excellent prompt ~ 🙂
YW John! Taking a historical twist for next week!
Thanks Babs! Bring on the history! ~I will do my best to weave the prompt ~ Thanks for the clue 🙂
I hope death isn’t striking Marg swiftly, or she won’t get to spend her huge bonus!
Well Ali, live for today is the ultimate key to life, who knows what will happen tomorrow~ I go along with your hopes though~ Long live Marg! ~ 🙂
You are amazing! Waiting for the next part…
Thank-you Shivangi ~ I’m happy you are enjoying the Saga ~ 🙂
Ooouuee, I can’t wait! Who died? Marg? I’m assuming it is her because she was the last one your wrote about.. how about a hint…??
The answer lies in the tea-leaves Joy! ~ Great heroines are really tough and death is a very broad concept ~ I am glad you are enjoying this ongoing saga my friend ~ Have a lovely weekend ~ 🙂
Thank you for writing it for us to enjoy!
Joy 🙂
Intriguing John, the plot is thickening, you have us wanting to read next week now, well done and very clever how you are using each weeks image as a link in your story.
Thank you Michael ~ This is a very good excercise in writing, I can thoroughly recommend it to improve the flash writing skills. I will be concentrating on History on Monday apparently ~ Have a good weekend my friend ~ 🙂
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