I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 22/06/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words, not including the given opening sentence.
The link below takes you to Part Twenty-Eight
© 2015, Barbara W. Beacham
Finish the story begins with:
“Hey boys, how ’bout y’all makin’ yer Ma some wind chimes?”
This incredible greeting was made by a very tall American, wearing a large stetson with a clerical collar, who appeared from a hut as they entered an Indian village in the Brazilian jungle.
“Hi!” Replied Marg,” The wind blows freely in the jungle.”
“Glad to meet you, Madame Marg. I have been expecting you, I’m Father Michael. Everything has been prepared, we have a meal ready for you and there is a pile of packages for your attention.”
“I see now why we had to have an identification routine. I couldn’t understand why, when Don Fernando’s message came over the radio.”
Then another figure appeared from the hut, wearing combat fatigues, Angelo grinning all over his face stepped forward.
Marg was delighted. “Hi! What are you doing here?”
“I am here to travel with you all the way to Miners Hill, there is a cloud of suspicion to counter.”
“What!”
(150 Words)
To be continued
The link below takes you to Part Twenty-Eight
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Good one.
Thanks YS ~ Nice to hear you enjoyed this episode ~ 🙂
Once in…. you have woven your magic. Such a clever way to use this prompt. Now what is this cloud of suspicion?
A misty mysterious magical cloud ~ CQ ~ Guaranteed to mystify ~ I thank you so much for the lovely comment ~ 🙂
That should have been again…. not in…. my large cat sat on my laptop and broke my ‘a’ key. I have to cut and past the ‘a’ and sometimes, I get carried away…. duh….
Every reader is appreciated CQ. Give that awesome cat a stroke of gratitude for me 🙂 Have a great week ~
Nice use of the prompt John. I hate that I have to wait a week to read the next bit. Well done and thanks again for another excellent contribution to the Be well… ^..^
Thank YOU! for your wonderful prompt again Babs ~ I am so grateful for your wonderful weekly challenges ~ Have a lovely week my friend ~ 🙂
Thank you and you too!
Missed the Mondays Finish the Story challenge…
I guess this is an error ~ Be happy and enjoy the story ~ 🙂
It was just me not doing something right.
Uh Oh, cloud of suspicion to counter…wonder what that is!? I’m glad Marg is going to have Angelo to accompany her.
Thanks for your response Joy ~ The plot thickens into a smokescreen 🙂
Another mysterious instalment. Very good indeed.
Many thanks Francesca ~ I am enjoying the ongoing challenge ~ 🙂
Interesting use of the prompt but you’ve kept the story going, can’t wait to see where it goes next. Clouds of suspicion leave it wide open. Good choice!
Thank you for your great feedback Yolanda ~ That is a very unique prompt ~ Babs is so brilliant at selecting the pictures to marry up with her prompts. 🙂
I guess I will have to bookmark your site to read about that ‘cloud of suspicion’. The way you used the prompt is a lesson for a novice like me. Great read!
I’m glad you are enjoying the story ~ Have fun and write on ~ 🙂
Nice, I was wondering how you were going to get wind chimes into your story this week. Well done using it as part of the identification protocol!
Let’s hope one of Marg’s packages contains something capable of detecting last week’s tracking device 🙂
Thanks Ali ~ That sounds like a great start to next week ~ Have a great week ~ 🙂
How mysterious!! I have a dear departed cousin named Father Michael too. Will the conclusion be next week?
Thanks Oliana for your response ~ I don’t know when the conclusion will ever be ~ This is part 29 and still going strong. 🙂
Clever use of the prompt. Unexpected meetings. New things to look forward to next week. Well cone, John. 🙂 — Suzanne
Many thanks Suzanne ~ I am happy to know you are enjoying the series ~ Thanks again for your always lovely comments 🙂
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These just keep getting more and more intriguing! Love the air of mystery you’ve woven in this one!
Thanks Lori ~ I hope I can continue to hold your interest ~ 🙂
Oh I’ve no doubts you will, John and you are most welcome!