Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers ~ Writing challenge.
Hosted by Priceless Joy.
The goal is to write a story between 100-150 words (give or take 25 words) based on the provided photo.
THE HAIRDRESSER
by John Yeo
The treasure map was clearly marked with a cryptic clue. Dan reached the shore of a very strange Island, they began hacking their way to the interior of the jungle covered Island. Eleanor ran a comb through her hair and kept behind Dan as he cleared a path. Eleanor was studying the map closely
“We must head due South West Dan, until we reach what looks like a waterfall.”
“OK Eleanor! We should be there within the hour.”
Eleanor patted the loose curls on her head and kept to the path.
Suddenly there was a sound of water crashing to the ground from a great height. The sound got louder and louder as they approached a huge double waterfall.
They both gasped in amazement.
Eleanor shouted to Dan. “The treasure is in a cave behind the exact spot where the two falls merge.”
Eleanor combed her hair flat and donned a wetsuit.
Dan watched as she fearlessly dived into the raging waters and emerged with a haversack of Inca jewels.
Eleanor bought a hairdressing business.
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a Treasure hunt is always fun
Thanks Donna ~ I appreciate your comments ~ 🙂
I really enjoyed this! They found the priceless Inca jewels so she could buy a hairdressing business! I loved it John!
Thanks for your comments PJ and for providing such a beautiful prompt.
You’re welcome and thank you!
Great story. It’s always good when the main characters in a treasure hunt actually find the treasure!
Thanks Mandibelle ~ I’m glad you enjoyed this post 🙂
HaHa…a hairdressing business is perfect for her! She was so worried about keeping her hair in order during the ordeal of finding the jewels..she is certain to take care of her customers the best way she can! I have a feeling, they will get their money’s worth!
You followed the hair routine perfectly Jesse ~ Thanks so much for your comments 🙂
John, thank you for participating in FFfAW challenge. 🙂
I enjoy following your interesting prompts ~ Keep up the good work PJ ~ 🙂